George convinces Roberto he is worthy of the quest. For what, we don't yet know. But he is on his way. This is another well written chapter, J. You lit the fuse on suspense with this one. What did Roberto see that he wasn't supposed to see? Will the same fate befall Geoge?
I say it every time but this chapter was the hardest to write so far—how much to tell, how much to hide (for later). I’m glad you liked it. We’re getting deeper in the the mystery with each chapter. Thanks for coming along for the ride.
The fresh view at a perspective from a stranger, Kathryn in this case, has a way of singling out a problem. The "damned cluttered mess" she finds isn't just the bar, is it?
George is one step closer! This is great, J. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Thanks Lyndsey. I think you’ll really like the next few chapters.
George convinces Roberto he is worthy of the quest. For what, we don't yet know. But he is on his way. This is another well written chapter, J. You lit the fuse on suspense with this one. What did Roberto see that he wasn't supposed to see? Will the same fate befall Geoge?
I say it every time but this chapter was the hardest to write so far—how much to tell, how much to hide (for later). I’m glad you liked it. We’re getting deeper in the the mystery with each chapter. Thanks for coming along for the ride.
You are a genius at crafting opening lines, J. I love the building mystery and sense of danger.
The fresh view at a perspective from a stranger, Kathryn in this case, has a way of singling out a problem. The "damned cluttered mess" she finds isn't just the bar, is it?
nope