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K.C. Knouse's avatar

A well-developed chapter leading to a suspenseful ending, J., with some physical comedy on the side. Looking forward to the next installment.

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J. Curtis's avatar

Thanks KC! This was a fun chapter to write, with a few trips to a local farm to listen to how chickens sound when bothered. Sort of smelly research but *braaawk*... worth it.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

What a mystery this is. Every page is full of tension! Nice work, J.

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J. Curtis's avatar

Thanks Sharron! Almost ready start paying off that attention debt 😉

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Rosie B's avatar

The egg stealing brothers made me laugh! The tension and mystery you are building is captivating. I’m totally hooked.

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