Crazy curious about the man in the mirrored glasses, and picking up on how the fog was heavy during his arrival at the boats during the last chapter, and then seems to evaporate with his departure here. 🤔
Thanks KC! This was a fun chapter to write, with a few trips to a local farm to listen to how chickens sound when bothered. Sort of smelly research but *braaawk*... worth it.
Crazy curious about the man in the mirrored glasses, and picking up on how the fog was heavy during his arrival at the boats during the last chapter, and then seems to evaporate with his departure here. 🤔
Like Crowded House says: “everywhere you go, you always take the weather.”
A well-developed chapter leading to a suspenseful ending, J., with some physical comedy on the side. Looking forward to the next installment.
Thanks KC! This was a fun chapter to write, with a few trips to a local farm to listen to how chickens sound when bothered. Sort of smelly research but *braaawk*... worth it.
What a mystery this is. Every page is full of tension! Nice work, J.
Thanks Sharron! Almost ready start paying off that attention debt 😉
The egg stealing brothers made me laugh! The tension and mystery you are building is captivating. I’m totally hooked.