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S M Garratt's avatar

Ah bugger...I was just going to have a quick read, and now I'm going to have to read all 8 chapters! Thanks, guys... another afternoon not writing coming up!

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Shannon W Haynes's avatar

Ahhh… this is how we do it! I’m reading along for sure.

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Stephanie Sweeney's avatar

Intriguing!

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

I love the mystery you present here, J : "If only he knew—if her father understood that with just one touch, she could read him better than a book—would he feel any different about finding her?" Such an intriguing story and masterfully written.

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J. Curtis's avatar

You should read the other chapters folks have jumped in to write and keep the story going. I added a link to the next at the bottom of the post. Really great stuff coming.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Will do!

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CansaFis Foote's avatar

…the BART is the grossest train in any municipality in worldwide…the things i have seen…

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C.S. Mee's avatar

I love an outsider

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J. Curtis's avatar

Same. Feels like good company.

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