George. Is it too late for him? I wonder. He's been damaged by his dysfunctional mother, but he can survive and thrive IF he is tenacious! Parents just don't know what they do to their kids. Here is a 50-word iteration of the theme. https://sharronbassano.substack.com/p/gratitude
You have a fine story started here, J! I look forward to Chapter 3 and am hoping for a little redemption...
This was a great scene. A nice primer to George's vivid imagination.
Thanks Shane!
Hauling ass once again. When will it end? Maybe there's hope to be found on la isla.
Maybe?
I'm liking it J, but then, anything Sharron reads and comments on is going to get my attention.
Thanks Ben
George. Is it too late for him? I wonder. He's been damaged by his dysfunctional mother, but he can survive and thrive IF he is tenacious! Parents just don't know what they do to their kids. Here is a 50-word iteration of the theme. https://sharronbassano.substack.com/p/gratitude
You have a fine story started here, J! I look forward to Chapter 3 and am hoping for a little redemption...
Loving this J
How long do we have to wait before the next chapter???
Ha! Just a week.
I like George.
Me too.
Slow down there, bucko! Some of us gotta read real careful, and my lips can only go so fast
we are two of a kind, AP. I am highlighting the standout lines in crayon.
Soon we recreate the key scenes in modelling clay and glitter
I could be talked into selling the rights for a claymation version 😆
I could direct the musical!
Yes! Musical claymation!
Coffee, hot coffee mind you, just sputtered out onto my laptop.