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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Back again to say that I'm taking my sweet time this time and loving it all the way

Shane Bzdok's avatar

This was a great scene. A nice primer to George's vivid imagination.

J. Curtis's avatar

Thanks Shane!

K.C. Knouse's avatar

Hauling ass once again. When will it end? Maybe there's hope to be found on la isla.

Ben Woestenburg's avatar

I'm liking it J, but then, anything Sharron reads and comments on is going to get my attention.

Sharron Bassano's avatar

George. Is it too late for him? I wonder. He's been damaged by his dysfunctional mother, but he can survive and thrive IF he is tenacious! Parents just don't know what they do to their kids. Here is a 50-word iteration of the theme. https://sharronbassano.substack.com/p/gratitude

You have a fine story started here, J! I look forward to Chapter 3 and am hoping for a little redemption...

CB Mason | YA Dystopian+Sci-Fi's avatar

How long do we have to wait before the next chapter???

J. Curtis's avatar

Ha! Just a week.

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Slow down there, bucko! Some of us gotta read real careful, and my lips can only go so fast

Sharron Bassano's avatar

we are two of a kind, AP. I am highlighting the standout lines in crayon.

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Soon we recreate the key scenes in modelling clay and glitter

J. Curtis's avatar

I could be talked into selling the rights for a claymation version 😆

Sharron Bassano's avatar

I could direct the musical!

J. Curtis's avatar

Yes! Musical claymation!

J. Curtis's avatar

Coffee, hot coffee mind you, just sputtered out onto my laptop.

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