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𝐂𝐁 𝐌𝐚𝐬𝐨𝐧's avatar

You didn’t warn us this was turning into a horror story! I’m with Sharon… I might have gotten out of the boat, but as soon as I came across the spider web, I would’ve beat sheets back to the boat. I never would’ve made it through the cornfield.

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Exciting stuff,J. I zipped through this chapter wanting to know what was next for poor George. You come up with some dandy imagery, for example, "It can take a high dive off the Empire State Building and land on a bicycle with no seat." Well written action that is full of suspense. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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