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Shane Bzdok's avatar

Some really nice writing here, J. You really brought George's father to life. He feels real - and restless. I like him already.

Loving the text dividers. Are those pieces of the map?

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Ah. some interesting back story to add depth. When I was in high school, I dreamed of owning a Triumph. Now I know what it is like to ride in one.

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