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A.P. Murphy's avatar

The tastes, textures, sounds and smells are all present here, a very phenomenological experience if I may be so fancy-pants about it. It does a great job of placing the reader inside this location.

So the marriage of realism and folktake/fable is all handled really well, I reckon.

You know the only thing I think is missing in the story from my own memories of this coast? The mosquitoes, always there, always sticking their bloody proboscis into you, and always buzzing in your ear.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

"And if the gods chose to see it that way ...

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