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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Floods! Fires! Earthquakes! Storms! Beasts! Winds! Spirits! Demons! Whew! This story has been one hell of a ride. Maybe the wildest I've ever had. I kept forgetting George was only 12! This sentence: "The visions trembled, flickering between surfaces as if unsure which world to hold." Sounds to me like the author has more than a passing acquaintance with lysergic acid diethylamide ... just saying...

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Another magical chapter overflowing with supernatural phenomena,J. This sentence is biblical: "Children playing, listening to the wind, watching for falling stars on a summer night—not expecting to see one, only watching with open hands, ready to receive whatever the sky gives.” This explains why Roberto crawled off at the end with nothing. His motives made him unworthy. George was the true seeker, willing to receive what was given. A movie version of this book would blow the Indiana Jones flicks and all of the knock-offs out of the water. Fantastic imaginative writing, J.

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