Now the island shaped like a pez doblado will be forever linked to the death of George's father. This bit of description is exceptional: "The entirety of the Yucatán peninsula, nearly half his body length drawn on paper, arced upward like a defiant fist—Guatemala and Belize forming the wrist, Cancún’s knuckles raised high before curving back down toward Campeche."
The pencil felt sharp on this chapter, J. Feels like you're finding your rhythm and tone. This was a vivid read. Following George's sleuthing of the map and moments of Cohen along the way. It was all playing out in my mind's eye (and ear). Nice addition. I am very much looking forward to the next installment.
Gripping! And cinematic with the music woven through at key moments.
Thanks Stephanie!
Now the island shaped like a pez doblado will be forever linked to the death of George's father. This bit of description is exceptional: "The entirety of the Yucatán peninsula, nearly half his body length drawn on paper, arced upward like a defiant fist—Guatemala and Belize forming the wrist, Cancún’s knuckles raised high before curving back down toward Campeche."
Yes, of all the darlings to kill, that was not one of them. Thanks for pointing it out and for reading.
Oh my, J. Riveting.
Thanks Sharron. This chapter was a tough one to navigate… how much, how little. Glad you liked it. And thank you for reading. ❤️
i like the use of the music, beautiful writing j
Much thanks, friend.
The pencil felt sharp on this chapter, J. Feels like you're finding your rhythm and tone. This was a vivid read. Following George's sleuthing of the map and moments of Cohen along the way. It was all playing out in my mind's eye (and ear). Nice addition. I am very much looking forward to the next installment.
Thanks Lyndsey. So kind of you. ❤️